Out of "pencil"
I love your pencilmation animations but this one was not good enough I'm afraid.
The same style is there but we barely saw the pencil.
We have the story that goes plain and unchanging, and then the pencil changes it somewhat.
That is what pencilmation is all about.
Sometimes it doesn't mater what the story is, but more about what the pencil do.
That's what makes this series so great.
Make more "pencil" into the animation.
The color part isn't so great either, because it don't match the single color pencil.
Pencilmations are about, what ideas can you come up with from using a pencil.
That is exciting.
This animation lost all that.
The art-style is simply not good enough.
I end this review by saying that you need to use the pencil more and don't use colors.
Use background color only.
P.S. Great animation anyway.
P.S.S. Try make an animation by the name, Out of Ink.
Could be cool XD
Would be exciting since you wouldn't know how you could use a pencil without ink :D
Try it out.
Avage flash movie, but major errors
First of all, I have to wonder how this got to be on the front page but never mind that.
The plot for this flash movie is quite good but not executed so well.
We all see a man who writes a letter to someone and goes to the post house to send it.
What first got my attention was the Italian flag.
I did wonder why it was there but if you are Italian then it's ok.
Then the letter is delivered and i thought it would go for more since the flash movie's name is "Email > Mail", which I presume means that Email is superior to the regular mail, but then the movie ends with a robot transform the delivery man into a computer with the words "You got mail!" and you hear the Daft Punk music and then the flash ends.
First of all, that annoys me since I expected more out of what happened in the flash.
Next, the words are in Italian i presume.
How are we suppose to know what it says?
I could understand the meaning that you use a different language if I found this a different place but this is NewGrounds.
People here speak English and if you can speak English too, then why the Italian text?
Next is the credits:
They are supose to be IN the flash and not in the description.
Speaking of, you only credit your self in the flash.
Legally speaking, this flash is actually illegal since no credit was given within the submission.
Last we have the end screen.
There is no replay button.
So even if we wanted to watch this again, we have to reload the page.
That is unnecessarily.
I give 5/10 stars for the reason that there are many errors here and that they are major too.
Some quick changes to the ending screen and this flash could earn another star.
P.S. the drawings are good for their art.
Amazing episode :D
I am the one who uploads the episodes as soon as the episodes comes out to a different site.
To settle it out:
In the videos I tell that I only presents them and I didn't make them but you did.
So i take nothing of credit.
now that's out of the way.
I am amazed how many sprites you actually made in this :O
I especially love the Sonic the Firehog sprite :D
I didn't think it would be THIS advanced to get Peach back this time so it's awesome :D
Take your time with the next one.
If they get this good in that time then i am willing to wait two years :D
Keep up the awesome work Alvin :)
I was completely amazed by this.
I expected a stickman fighting a TETRIS character or something like that.
This wasn't original but was so well made.
The blocks followed the rhythm.
A flash don't always have to be original or there will be not many flashes around.
A little of that and a little of that, if done correctly, it will be amazing.
And that is what you did.
I can be hard to amaze but you did it.
I realy hope you will make a 2.
Where are other things like this? I want to see what others have done.
Not so good
I have to agree with SufferingPlanet, this was a no good.
Besides, the animations were like drawn by a 4 year old(some of them at least)
You just toke some old ideas and showed them to us.
That's it, old ideas.
This is nothing more than old ideas.
It got out of hand too.
This has almost no identical work like the first one.
Maybe you did allot of work but let me tell you, it's work not worth paying for.
Sorry to say this but, this sucked.
No offense to the animators them self but you did this poor :(
Try figure out some ideas that haven't been showed before.
Use more time on the animation instead of just using a day or two.
And keep to the meaning of "Brawl Taunts"
Follow these and this could have been allot better. :)
No words can explain how good this is O_O
It really makes you want to say: "MORE!!! WE WANT MORE!!!"
But since this was last step i guess there won't be more.
But still, this is an amazing flash.
WAAAAYY more than amazing.
10/10 vote 5 fav SWF and fav author.
More can't you praise it.
And thus ended a good shorts series.
There are very few things i like on how to make flashes around, and many of the flashes sucks to the bones.
But if it wasn't for the flash gods, then nobody would watch flashes.
This flash make me both sad and happy at the same time.
And that is rare for me to have.
I, Hasaxan92, will call you as one of these flash gods.
Your series was good from the very beginning, even at the title screen.
Even though you quit, the spirit of a new flash god, will keep going through the internet till the end.
You are an idol to many newbies and pros around Newgrounds and other places.
Your short flash series will be in the Hall of Fame, for as long as the will be flashes.
I will say for me, and many others around: thank you for your series.
I truly have no regrets of watching this.
It is like... we have been on an adventure through your series.
All there is left to say is:
Great job, Daniel Sun ;)
A flash for the song.
But the screen is too small. :(
Here is what you can do to get it bigger:
Bigger screen(not V-Cam).
And that's it.
Wow this was totally awesome!!!
This is your first flash?
Then that means you are naturally experienced very high.
There is nothing wrong here.
Maybe sometimes a little to fast but the animation is better than a professional.
And you did this in 48 hours? JUST INCREDIBLE!!!
I can't explain how good this is.
Classic style of classic music, just perfect.
All the randomness is just in the right spot.
This is definitely not your last flash, you just keep making flash.
If you keep up this you will probably be known as a flash professional.
People will ask you how you make this and all that i a definitely sure about that.
My words; You are the best.
i worked 48 on it, i didnt make it in one weekend, but thx
Wow so good
This animation is totally awesome.
I also hate the cat accounts here on NG
vote: 5 and score: 10 from me here :)
So sad about P-Bot o;
Some of the characters could i not recognize cause they are so good animated XD(except Pico)
I would like to ask if i could get permission to put this flash on YouTube?
All credit will be yours of cause.
Anywho this flash was totally a favorite of mine.
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