Out of "pencil"

I love your pencilmation animations but this one was not good enough I'm afraid.
The same style is there but we barely saw the pencil.
We have the story that goes plain and unchanging, and then the pencil changes it somewhat.
That is what pencilmation is all about.
Sometimes it doesn't mater what the story is, but more about what the pencil do.
That's what makes this series so great.
Make more "pencil" into the animation.

The color part isn't so great either, because it don't match the single color pencil.

Pencilmations are about, what ideas can you come up with from using a pencil.
One pencil.
That is exciting.
This animation lost all that.
The art-style is simply not good enough.

I end this review by saying that you need to use the pencil more and don't use colors.
Use background color only.

~Hasaxan92

P.S. Great animation anyway.

P.S.S. Try make an animation by the name, Out of Ink.
Could be cool XD
Would be exciting since you wouldn't know how you could use a pencil without ink :D
Try it out.

Amazing episode :D

I am the one who uploads the episodes as soon as the episodes comes out to a different site.
To settle it out:
In the videos I tell that I only presents them and I didn't make them but you did.
So i take nothing of credit.
now that's out of the way.

I am amazed how many sprites you actually made in this :O
I especially love the Sonic the Firehog sprite :D
I didn't think it would be THIS advanced to get Peach back this time so it's awesome :D
Take your time with the next one.
If they get this good in that time then i am willing to wait two years :D

Keep up the awesome work Alvin :)

Good

johny399: In other words: make a new LoZ T_T kinda dumb.
It takes nintendo some time to make one of these games and you ask these guys to make one too?
Too big of a job.

Wow this is the best!

I completed the game with 3 medals.
Awesome made.
You could call this the alternate ending from SHIFT 1.
Ohh and smroWfonaC, you level has plenty of places that you can get stuck unlike the game.
Mine however have i checked so much that you only can get stuck on purpas.(sry don't know how it spelled -_-)
Here is the code for my game:
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LOL XD

"GO" on with it.
This was fun to listen and the entire song is only the "GO"s
It is good and fun to listen to.
Awesome made.